Short Story Reviews: Theodore L. Thomas’ “Broken Tool” (1959), “The Far Look” (1956), and “The Good Work” (1959)

The following review of Theodore L. Thomas’ “Broken Tool” (1959) is the 6th post in my series on “SF short stories that are critical in some capacity of space agencies, astronauts, and the culture which produced them.” I have gone ahead and added two additional stories, including one that explores similar territory with a more positivist conclusion, by the same author.

Thank you Jennifer Jodell, “Friend of the Site,” for bringing it to my attention.

Previously: Theodore Sturgeon’s “The Man Who Lost the Sea” in The Magazine of Fantasy and Science Fiction, ed. Robert P. Mills (October 1959). You can read the story online here.

Up next: Kris Neville’s “Cold War” in Astounding Science Fiction, ed. John W. Campbell, Jr. (October 1949). You can read it online here.

Martinez’s interior art for Theodore L. Thomas’ “Broken Tool” (1959)

“Broken Tool” (1959), 3.5/5 (Good): You can read the story online here.

Theodore L. Thomas speculates on an unintended consequence of training cadets for deep space exploration—the creation of a radical, unmoored from earth, who only looks outward. Our ambition to explore must not subsume one’s connection to home.

Two space cadet instructors, Walter Carter and Cecil Hardy, await the return on their star student Lightner. Carter remembers the failure of his own son, Walt, and places all his dreams on Lightner. Cecil warns Carter that the last test will determine if he will be successful: “His emotions on going home will tell us whether he really is a deep-space man or just another very skillful space pilot. We have no other way of knowing” (38).

Lightner lands his spacecraft outside of his hometown. He walks its streets. His memories pass before his eyes. His first kiss. His home. The familiar patterns of life in small town America. Lightner does not pause: “This was not where he belonged” (40). Carter and Cecil struggle with the results of the test. Cecil voices what both know: “A man must believe in something greater than his ambition. He must have roots. […] This boy has nothing to come back to, no fundamental ties to Earth” (41). Cecil continues, “That boy is a fanatic” (141). Thomas’ story fits the theme of this series as he focuses on those who, captured by the dream of exploration, possess deep psychological flaws that make them unsuitable.

The story was anthologized in Kindred Spirits: An Anthology of Gay and Lesbian Science Fiction, ed. Jeffrey M. Elliot (1984) (contents). Did Elliot interpret Carter’s obsession with the much younger Lightner as more than paternal affection after the death of his own son? Or are Carter and Cecil’s displays of friendly interaction code for queer companionship in a moment of extreme shared sadness? Elliot might be conflating homosocial relationships–Thomas’ hyper-masculine world of the Space Academy–with queer overtones?

I suspect Elliot read Carter and Cecil as a surrogate “couple” responsible for “raising” Lightner. If this is the correct interpretation, this is a very positive depiction of a gay relationship (even with the sad ending). Let me know your take–SF from the 50s that tackled queer desire are rare and fascinating!

Frank Kelly Freas’ cover for the July 1959 issue of Astounding Science Fiction, ed. John W. Campbell, Jr.

Kelly Freas’ cover for the February 1959 issue of If, ed. Damon Knight

“The Good Work” (1959), 3.5/5 (Good): You can read the story online here. Science fiction authors love to explore the unintended results of a post-scarcity/overpopulated future. You know the pattern: overpopulated world, processed food, man wants to work and to provide, man escapes to the outside and collapses to the ground and sinks his fingers into the soil. The traditionalist as radical….

Occasionally these tales, especially the 60s varieties, echo central tenets of Counterculture back-to-the-land rhetoric (escape suburbia and grow your food and commune with nature). More often than not, they read as attempts to justify 50s/60s gender roles and the underlying tenets of American capitalism. Theodore L. Thomas’ take, at first glance, appears to fall into the later category.

“The Good Work” follows Jeremiah Winthrop (names are important), “there was a dignity to the man that showed itself in every movement” from his “New England” stock (28), in his quest to find work. His family desires to consume real food sold by John Barlow, who hides his vegetal fragments like  precious objects in a small box down in the bowels of the arcology. Winthrop does odd jobs for Barlow but one day Barlow calls it quits. Winthrop, with his wife’s support, heads to the endless multi-week lines to receive government work.

And the work he receives gives him meaning and the ability to avoid “Standard Far” extruded from the massive city’s interspersed nozzles. But there’s a subversive twist. This really is a post-scarcity future. And radicals like Jeremiah Winthrop will also be subsumed by the system. And work might not be what it seems.

An effectively told satire of a common SF trope.

Ed Emshwiller’s interior art for August 1956 issue of Astounding Science Fiction

“The Far Look” (1956), 3.5/5 (Good): You can read it online here.

Like “Broken Tool,” “The Far Look” charts the deep psychological impact of space exploration. Two astronauts (Don Fowler and Al McIntosh) return from the Moon with “The Far Look”–lines, as if prematurely aged, radiate outward from their eyes. Two scientists (Dr. Scott and Dr. Webb) cannot find a scientific logic behind the transformation.

The traumatic experiences of Don Fowler and Al McIntosh on the moon, and their friendship welded by shared struggles, ultimately provide a satisfying explanation for the mysterious symptom. Replacing a previous astronaut pair, Don and Al experience a meteor shower, traverse a landscape of hostile emptiness and true isolation, and experience the inner turmoil at the possibility of losing the other.

While scientific purists might protest “this wasn’t the way the moon was explored or how astronauts felt,” I find Thomas’ willingness to depict exploration as simultaneously filled with psychological challenges that also must be overcome seductive. The hard sciences won’t provide all the solutions.

Ed Emshwiller’s for the August 1956 issue of Astounding Science Fiction, John W. Campbell, Jr.

Final Thoughts: Across the Theodore L. Thomas stories I read for this post, three patterns emerge: an obsessive doubling of male character pairs (astronauts, scientists, far future workers in urban arcologies, space cadets, space cadet instructors), tender shows of affection between men, and an often critical (and possibly subversive?) look at masculinity. I will be returning to his work.

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13 thoughts on “Short Story Reviews: Theodore L. Thomas’ “Broken Tool” (1959), “The Far Look” (1956), and “The Good Work” (1959)

  1. Fascinating, as usual. Hard not to wonder at that queer angle with “Broken Tool”. I’m wholly unfamiliar with the name. I wonder, however, if there is possibly some relevant personal information in that regard, as that might permit an editor to, let’s say, read a bit more into the stories than the text would allow for on its face.

    • Thank you for the kind words.

      I would love to know more about the author as well. He was chemist. Can’t find much else. He’s best known for two average novels he co-wrote with Kate Wilhelm (The Clone and Year of the Cloud).

      He never received a collection of his fiction.

      As for “Broken Tool,” I do not own the Kindred Spirits anthology so I’m not sure if there’s a revelatory intro to clarify its inclusion. There are a few moments in the story where both men might be interpreted as holding queer affection for each other and/or a depiction of them as a parental “couple” to the young man space cadet. It’s very hidden (if at all) — which would make sense in a 50s SF magazine. A goodreads review (generally don’t put much stock in those) claims the story shouldn’t even be included in the Kindred Spirits anthology as it doesn’t contain any queer content. I feel like it’s far more liminal and hidden. It’s really hard to tell because in both other stories in this review the male pairs (astronauts, men who want to work, etc.) often act in a similar “close” way. I dunno!

    • Do I think it’s a masterpiece of a story? No. Do I think it’s a fascinating 50s vision more for what it might contain and its subversive sentiment? Yes. Is it probably more making my historian vs. literary senses happy? Definitely.

      It’s just a few pages, I’d love to know your thoughts on it!

  2. I’ve only just read it. It’s nowhere near a masterpiece, in fact I would say it’s only just average. I couldn’t get into it and didn’t really know what it was about, because I found it bland. That’s not to say it’s themes aren’t interesting, but I didn’t find them powerful enough.

    • Thanks for stopping by Richard,

      I’m assuming you read “Broken Tool”? I never called it a masterpiece or suggested it was.

      I mentioned this in the comment above: “Do I think it’s a masterpiece of a story? No. Do I think it’s a fascinating 50s vision more for what it might contain and its subversive sentiment? Yes. Is it probably more making my historian vs. literary senses happy? Definitely.”

      So, I’m more interested in the possibility of queer content and the idea that training for space could create radicals considering the historical context in which it was written than how it is told! And for me, that is enough to give it a “Good” rating. I agree with your assessment that it lacks memorable sequences that would elevate it.

  3. I know you didn’t Joachim, but I was emphasizing just how far below it was from being one. It just didn’t appeal to me. I understand though that it’s themes are interesting to you.

  4. Hello, Joachim. Long time reader, first time poster.

    Broken Tool is an interesting story. I read it before looking at your review and didn’t detect anything particularly coded gay about the piece and I am usually alert to these things! I found the story very melancholy and felt sorry for Lightner. Many of us outgrow our hometown and to think that your life’s ambition might be thwarted because you didn’t feel a strong enough connection to your childhood home is pretty gloomy.

    Incidentally, there’s a copy of Kindred Spirits available on The Internet Archive to borrow. There’s a short biography of Thomas but no mention of his sexuality.

    • Hello Stephen,

      Thanks for the comment and kind words. I won’t lie, I’m a bit confused why it was in the Kindred Spirits anthology. I’m assuming that the close relationship between Cecil and Carter (and how they give each other emotional support) is what the editor of Kindred Spirits picked up on? But yes, I definitely feel sorry for Lightner. For all we know the intense training he went through was the cause of his lack of connection to Earth. Isn’t the implication that Carter is also something of a radical? In that instance, he almost (without the counsel of Cecil) makes the wrong call by suggesting that he not experience the last trial.


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